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inculding Japan's..... Feb 3, 2013 2:23:27 GMT

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Post by richardsol on Feb 3, 2013 2:23:27 GMT

Hi,

Can I drop the word "society" as being implied after the word "Japan's"?

He believes that many societies, including Japan's, have raised people with 20th century skills not wholly applicable for the 21st century.

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Richard

Dave Spam Monitor Posts: 1,533	inculding Japan's..... Feb 3, 2013 6:19:54 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dave on Feb 3, 2013 6:19:54 GMT Yes, I agree that society would be understood.
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Sue M-V Platinum Posts: 1,937	inculding Japan's..... Feb 3, 2013 16:12:23 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sue M-V on Feb 3, 2013 16:12:23 GMT Likewise. Sue
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Tone Platinum "I'm older than my memories but not as old as my knowledge." Posts: 3,085	inculding Japan's..... Feb 3, 2013 20:59:18 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tone on Feb 3, 2013 20:59:18 GMT I would also agree. And you could also drop all the superfluous dots and use a proper (and properly placed) ellipsis in your > inculding Japan's..... <. (I'll forgive the, presumed" typo in "inculding".) Tone
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richardsol New Member Posts: 10	inculding Japan's..... Feb 4, 2013 1:11:02 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richardsol on Feb 4, 2013 1:11:02 GMT Thanks everyone.... including the inculding!

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Post by Dave on Feb 3, 2013 6:19:54 GMT

Post by Sue M-V on Feb 3, 2013 16:12:23 GMT

Post by Tone on Feb 3, 2013 20:59:18 GMT

Post by richardsol on Feb 4, 2013 1:11:02 GMT

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